No More Elegies Today

Today I will

write a poem

about bittersweet joy

It will not be meant to sway you with metaphor.

It will not be toxic

or double-edged

or dramatic.

But rather about the joy that

breaks your heart

just a little piece though.

But rather the laughing 8 year old

trying to figure out what

fitting in means.

But rather the birthday girl watching her

mermaid balloon fly into the clouds

all the grown-ups around suddenly a team of distractors.

But rather groups of teachers

together problem solving and laughing too

because adversity needs humor,

because humor creates belonging.

But rather the friend of a friend

leaning forward with understanding to whisper

“It’s hard to listen to something

so riddled with untruth.”

I’m looking for poetry challenges. Today I wrote inspired by “To Elegize or Not to Elegize” on Ethical ELA.

2 thoughts on “No More Elegies Today

  1. It’s Keely, right-? I’ve just now realized: Your posts on Ethical ELA come up as “Ona” for On a Thought! I read your poem there a few moments ago and left this comment…

    So many lines glitter like jewels here! What an interesting topic, bittersweet joy, I especially love the little piece of the heart breaking with it, and these lines: “Because adversity needs humor/because humor creates belonging.” This is true! Every scene you have captured here imparts a stab of bittersweet joy in its “realness.”

  2. Hi! I can’t figure out why my other account is the one that comes up on ethical ela! A strange word press thing.

    But although I have a bff named Keely, my name is Ona! Maybe the early- no-coffee yet is making me misunderstand the start of your comment. Lol.

    Anyway thank you so much! I appreciate the comment- and the fact that you commented here and there!

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