This slice is part of
of the March Slice of Life Challenge on Two Writing Teachers! #sol25. I’m slicing every day in March. Thanks for stopping by!
Sunshine heats the deck
Don’t mind dry fall leaves piled
Spring sun matters more
than the gathered old fall mess
Feel the sun recharge your joy
On a Thought 
You know so many different poem formats! I love the way this one flows, as well as the content – a lovely spring day. (Spring is coming!) I hope you have a relaxing week! Thank you for sharing.
Yes, I could feel the sun as I read your poem, and I felt the joy of that warmth overwhelming the fall “mess,” too.
Today’s sun DEFINITELY recharged my joy!
enjoying the sunshine across the country, too. I enjoyed reading a new poem structure!
Sunshine (and warmth) is the bliss we need after this winter.
”Feel the sun recharge your joy” deserves a standing ovations. These are the words I was searching for after spending some time outside. I love this poem format too!
Love the mug. Wish my deck were warm enough for sitting outside. For now I’ll enjoy the catharsis of warmth radiating in this verse. Happy almost spring!