Part of Slice of Life by Two Writing Teachers
From my chair (which is actually the nook of the couch) I see
Finnegan’s head popping up from my leg –
He’s just noticed the neighbor’s new puppy, Gus on a walk.
He will jump up any second, I think.
I can see Gus too.
But the light is getting dim out there.
The blinds should be closed by now.
From my chair (which is actually the nook of the couch) I feel
The heat of the fireplace –
I love to watch the flames, even out of the corner of my eyes.
I will turn it off soon, I think.
I can hear the sound of the fan too.
But it’s getting a little hot in here.
The fire should be off by now.
From my chair (which is actually the nook of the couch) I hear
The boys talking –
About bickering, “you can talk about bickering without bickering.”
I am told this as I type.
I can hear the oven beep too.
But I haven’t made the rest of dinner.
I should have fed my children by now.
From my chair (which is actually the nook of the couch) I see
Finnegan back on my leg –
Sleeping after his big adventure looking out the window.
I will have to move him soon.
He is all snuggled in too.
But I have to turn the fire off
And I need to feed the children now.
I was studying your structure here… I like the flow and symmetry of this poem. It is relaxing and makes me wish I were hanging out by the fire with my boys and my pets. 🙂
Thanks! I figured I’d play around with the structure. 🙂 It was relaxing… aside from the bickering about bickering! 🙂
Perfect idea for a March slice. The “should be…by now” really is a fitting line for me.And free wisdom from your boys… talk about bickering without bickering. 🙂