
it’s been raining, and it’s about to rain again
but even dogs who don’t like rain, need walks
so Finn and I walk
down, around, through the park, back up and around
he sniffs the rain-green grass, I sniff the air
the smell of the wood burning stove
from the house on the corner
is my favorite
we cross the quiet street
on a diagonal
avoid a Prius silently coming closer
finn loves the sound of a Prius
it’s the sound of someone coming home
he stops at the corner, head turned
wags his tail
sits at perfect attention
won’t budge when I ask him to
I don’t have the heart
to force him, show him I’m boss
the Prius parks
the man stares at us
Finn’s tail keeps wagging expectantly
I want to explain to the man
my dog thinks you’re his dad
he doesn’t understand that our Prius doesn’t come home anymore
that is why we are standing on the corner
staring at you
and the rain-green grass
This is so good. So very good. It captures you, your feelings and Finn, his feelings, and many huge, heavy, unspoken feelings.
Thank you. ❤️
Sending love. Know that you are stronger than you think. ❤ This piece captures so much. Love you, friend.
Your slice brought tears for you and for Finn. I knew what was coming and my heart hurt for both of you.
What a powerful post. I have so much to say, but unlike this poem that captures so much,not the right words. ❤️