March 18 Saturday

I’m writing every day of March for the Slice of Life Challenge at Two Writing Teachers

there were pancakes this morning
a walk
and the sun is pouring in the window as I write

I went to Lowes
which I hate
and got cleaning supplies which I used

it’s a good Saturday
with friends later
and even though I don’t want to, I miss you

9 thoughts on “March 18 Saturday

  1. The words fell together, painting a clear picture of a day, almost like any other…and then your final line hits like a punch to the gut. Rereading, I looked again for hints that it was coming, but felt it the second time around, too.

  2. Wow, like everyone else said, the sadness of those last three words is palpable. I too had to read it several times. Peace.

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